His writing employs a little bit of poetry in order to capture his feeling. Not all writing benefits from being as clear and bland as possible. HN should probably read some non-fiction books from time to time
I have read at least 1000 European and American novels, play, poetry etc. and never had a single issue.
The comment you refer to is just poorly written.
Not sure which novels you’re picking but in my experience novels are frequently more ambiguous and harder to parse than the parent comment, often on purpose. If you’ve really ’never had a single issue’ maybe you’re not choosing challenging texts
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Agreed. It was well written.
The focus wasn't on the exact timeline and facts of the situation. It was on what it felt like as he read the piece.
Why is he describing emotionally a factual event? He is leaving facts up to assumptions. I suppose sure, his intent was to confuse people. It worked.