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What were the signs this is AI slop?
em dash and also "moving reminders of how a single individual’s brilliance and tenacity can change the world". It's such a lazy writing pattern
I read The Smithsonian Magazine decades ago. That kind of writing isn't new for them, IIRC.

Now, if you want to say that they wrote in the same annoyingly pretentious way that AIs often do, I could agree with that...

LLMs got it from somewhere
The em dash gave it away
Here's an article in the Smithsonian magazine from 1995 with an em-dash:

https://www.smithsonianmag.com/arts-culture/review-of-the-pr...

Where do you think LLM's learned these things from? They are widely used in literary writing. Like magazines and books.

You are citing a single use of em-dashes in a single 30 year old article as proof of something.

If anything, the length of that article shows how rarely em-dashes were used by most writers. They're like exclamatory versions of semicolons, a contrived sudden interruption, a sort of inversion of the three dot "…" elipsis. Maybe the em-dash cracked and fell on the floor.

The reason LLMs use a lot of em-dashes is because that's a format they've chosen for output. Thinking that LLMs have a lot of em-dashes because works in the wild have a lot of em-dashes is like thinking that LLM output has a lot of emoticons because a lot of essayists use emoticons to mark subject divisions in the text.

A single one is sufficient evidence that calling out a single em-dash as evidence of AI use is flawed. Especially when it is from the same magazine.

There are also em-dashes in a huge number of their articles. I didn't spend time picking one. I just went back to the oldest article in the first category I picked, and found one on the first try. It's a common style for more "serious" magazines and always has been.

> Thinking that LLMs have a lot of em-dashes because works in the wild have a lot of em-dashes is like thinking that LLM output has a lot of emoticons because a lot of essayists use emoticons to mark subject divisions in the text.

No, thinking they do is like having read a lot of literary text and being aware of how it has a long history of being used in serious writing.

If you read a lot of books, particularly older ones, you'll find em dashes in all kinds of writing and used often. It's functional punctuation that once you understand you may even find yourself using it (and then being accused of being an AI, lol)
Not every single emdash ever used is AI
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